A new rouge (Brightstar!!!)

[icee]

(Sorry for God-moding Brighstar...)
Dark eyes gleamed in the shadows as Gold smelt a mouse. He began a hunter's crouch and soon began to stalk the little rodent, he smiled on how the mouse would taste, it would be his best meal in a while, maybe his only meal. Gold didn't want to hunt on the clan's clan but he didn't have a chose, he was just a sack of bones and fur. Then suddenly a she-cat (Brightstar) came out of nowhere, getting the mouse and ending it's life with one snap of her powerful jaws. Gold broke into a hiss. "That was mine," He growled. Walking out to the sunlight, Gold could have been the handsomest tom in the clans except for the fact that he was so thin that any cat could see every bone in his body. But other then that, his dark golden eyes glinted like chips of solid stone and his fur was nicely taken care of that it sparkled like diamonds in the sun.

[blackmoon]

(It's okay )

"Yours?" BrightStar growled back. "Last time I checked this was thunder Clan territory. So everything hear is mine and my clans. Bright-Stars Blue eyes looked at the rouge. she could kill him in an instant, very easily for that fact. But she just stared at him. Even tho is was emaciated, he still was handsome.

[icee]

Gold looked at Brightstar carefully. "What is your name?" He could see that Brightstar was well-cared for, had a fire in her eyes, and that she was very beautiful.

[blackmoon]

"I am Brightstar of ThunderClan. I am the leader, that means I am in charge." She looked down at her mouse. "Hear." she said picking it up in her jaws, and putting it at Gold's feet. "In star-Clans eyes all Cats are important. I won't let you starve. Not on my territory."

[icee]

Gold didn't know what to say. He looked at the she-cat, the leader of this "Thunder-Clan". He took the mouse and ate in three seconds. He looked at her again, his eyes warm now, now even more handsome. "Thank you. While you are here, can you explain what is this Thunder-Clan that you talk about?"

[blackmoon]

"It's a clan, like one big family that helps one another." BrightStar explained. "and out nameas atre realted to the elements. Our kits are named something than kit, and out app, are something Paw. Than I name the warriors."

[icee]

"A family," Gold whispered with a sadness in his heart.

[blackmoon]

Brightstar nodded, than looked down at her paws. "What happened to them?" she asked, as if she had read Golds mind.

[icee]

"I don't have a family." Gold whispered. "My father abandoned me and my mothered is dead."

[blackmoon]

Brightstar shook her head. "If that were true you could say it louder, and look me in the eyes."

[icee]

Gold snarled in his head, he spoke the truth. He looked Brightstar straight in the eyes and said. "I am all alone, my family is gone and my father abandoned me!" He said it, almost shouting.

[blackmoon]

BrightStar shrugged. "I said speaking louder, not shouting. You WILL respect me in my clan, and I don't care how you do it, you just do it. Got it?"

[icee]

Gold nodded and shrugged. He looked at Brightstar with a curious look in his eyes. "You said that I will respect you in your clan... So does that mean I am a ThunderClan member?"

[blackmoon]

BrightStar was taken aback for a moment, and pondered on what to say next. "If you wnat to I guess." she said all most calling her self insane.

[icee]

"A family..." Gold pondered for a seconded, thinking how wonderful it would be to have a family for once in his life. "I will join, if you would let me join. And you won't make me fight any cat?" Gold asked wearily, thinking of the Junkyard cats.