Deathly patrol (Open)

[Lilly]

Featherdice gathered up Jadeflare,Olivenose,and Daisypaw as Brairstar wished her to do for a hunting patrol. They headed to the river because all the fish would be back. Featheredice reached in to grab one when the river pulled her in. She called for help. Jadeflare(former riverclan warrior) jumped in grabbing for her friend. Olivenose saw the two warriors being swept away he jumped in. He tried so hard,but Jadeflare let go and they swept away. He stood there in pain,but ran along the river as he saw Featheredice's body up on the shore."Jadeflare,"he called,but there was no answer.He hissed at Daisypaw to go get some warrriors. She ran back to ca,p quick and yowled for her life."We need help down at the river"


{Just to let you know Featheredice is dead and Jadeflare disapered but not dead}

[Rainy]

Briarstar happened to be in camp at the time, along with Emberheart. The warriors rushed over at Olivenose's call, and Silverspring padded out of the nursery.

"Olivenose, what's wrong?" Briarstar mewed immediately.

[Lilly]

(Dasiypaw came back for help not Olivenose)

Dasiypaw took a deep breath and mewed," Featherdice tried to catch a fish but the river pulled her in so Jadeflare jumped in and tried to help her but they got swept away so Olivenose tried to save them but Jadeflare let go of his hand so they drifted away. Olivenose followed the river and found Featheredice's body dead but we couldn't find Jadeflare but we think she's not dead"

[Rainy]

"If we don't hurry she will be. I'm coming," Briarstar mewed. "Lead the way, Daisypaw."
"I'm coming too. I'm a better swimmer than you, Briarstar," Emberheart mewed and the leader noded.
"Me, too. I have a better nose, I will find her quicker," Darksight mewed, hurrying over. He had heard everything. "The other queens can look after Featherkit."
Briarstar and Emberheart exchanged a glance, but they would do whatever they could to find and save Jadeflare. Darksight was right, he would be useful.
"As fast as you can, Daisypaw."

[Lilly]

Daisypaw raced almost as fast as a cheetah to where the river was. Her clan was right behind her. Olivenose laid on the ground barely breathing and scratched up." Briarstar! Featheredice is dead and Jadeflare is missing! She went in Thunderclan territory as far as I could see,"he mewed. Daisypaw glanced at her leader and wondered,"Oh, Halopaw, where are you? Your clan needs you"

[Rainy]

Darksight dissappeared into ThunderClan's territory without saying a word. Briarstar felt a prickle of annoyance, but ThunderClan would have to excuse their tresspassing just this once. Emberheart glanced after the blind tom. "Daisypaw, follow him, in case he needs backup." The ginger she-cat turned to Olivenose. She wasn't a medicine cat, but she knew they had to clear any water in his lungs. But he was breathing a bit... oh what to do! Instead she rasped her tongue over her pelt, trying to warm him and bring him to conciousness.
Briarstar padded up to Featheredice's body, and bowded his head. "I'm sorry I couldn't save you. May your death have been quick and painless, and StarClan have found you soon. I'm sorry..."

[Lilly]

Daisypaw followed her leaders orders and went into Thunderclan territory.

Olivenose started coughing pretty hard."It's no use, trying to give me herbs, I will die,"he mewed with a hard cough.